Wednesday, 23 October 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Try not to start sentences with 'so'. Instead try and vary your sentence starters. Well done for completing your work on time this week.
ReplyDeleteHi connor, its me khiel. I really like your work because you added lots of important parts. I did this but it took me like 3 days to complete because it was hard to think of stuff and make it to 10 pharagraphs. Maybe next time you could not put DOOOOOONNNNNNNEEE. How much day did this take you to complete.
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