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Thursday, 21 November 2019

Moon man

We have been learning to write narrative from the first person,using I.
We also had to Show Not TELL!!!. hear is a link to watch the clip





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  1. Anonymous25 November 2019 at 11:14

    Eddie here
    I like how you started with "I got up from my sleep" and then carried on with the story.
    I also like how you did diary entries like my one.
    You could put caps on some of the words and more enthusiasm.

    From your best friend, Eddie

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