2020-2021 Kick Start Art

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This is my Summer Learning Journey kick start art task.

We had to colour in a image that we choose and put it into this document and describe it.

Here is my work that I did hope you like it.

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Athletics day on tuesday

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Today I will be telling you about athletics day.

It was on a Tuesday in the morning on a freezing cold raining morning we had to do athletics!!!.

We did long distance, shop put, high jump, long jump and discus. We did not do sprints because we where doing it in a hole school and it was raining and we did not have enough time.

The next day we did sprints and I tied with tori in the first heat and got second on the finals so Im going to zones for sprints and high jump because I got second and Im going to zones for relays but I dont know what that means. 

My favourite high jump and sprints.

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Fixing A Good Story

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Today I will be telling you about my surface features, Surface features are little bit in your writing like repeated words, spelling. We need to use to use surface features because it makes our writing easier for people to read. An example is: thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed This sentence doesn't have surface features We had to fix our writing if too many words where the same. 

On our Room 9 writing site we our teacher put on a link to a story we needed to fix. We made our own copy. We had to read it once and find the end of the sentences. We would put capital letters after the full stops. We new where the full stops had to go because there was a new idea so we put full stops there.

We had to read it again and fix the writing if it doesn't make scene and highlight all the repeating words. It sounds better if the words aren't  the same over and over again. One of the words we highlighted was 'he' then changed the name of the character.

Yesterday we read through it together and added some paragraphs. We got some people up the front to read aloud the fixed story. Xavier, Rinaz and Sean where the characters Xavier was very scary.

This is not our ideas or writing we just had to fix the surface features. This is what we had to fix :

He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder he tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. Mums had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us maybe he was one of them looking for revenge but why would he come. mum would just move and how did he find us we live on the other side of the planet from where all of mums boyfriends were so how could he find us he might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of the devises ‘Hello where are you I know your here you're going to tell me where you're mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies so which will it be death or freedom you have 10 seconds chose wisely’.

This is the writing I fixed

Mark kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder. He tried not to suffocate as He laid under the bed. wondering what had happened to his brother and his family.

 The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house.

 Mum has had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us. Maybe The man was one of them looking for revenge, but why would he come? Mum would just move. How did he find us? We live on the other side of the planet from where all of mum’s boyfriends were so how could he find us? The creep might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of her devices. “Hello where are you”?

 I know your here. you're going to tell me where your mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies. So which will it be, death or freedom! you have ten seconds to choose wisely.”

Can you see the changes that we made.

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Swimming

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Today I will be telling you about my swimming, We are at our last lesson today and everyone gets to jump off the diving board in the lane pool.

In my group for swimming is Devaani, Sophie,  Akimano, Divine, Ellenessa. Our Tudors name is Bella.

Our original instructor was Sue but she left us.

Swimming is pretty fun but your body is try it's hardest to prevent you from drowning and we think of it as a fun activity.

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Everyday Writing

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Today I will be sharing you my writing, we do different writing everyday here is my slideshow about it 

 

Word of the week

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Today I will be sharing my word of the week, Now we get to choose the word we want so Its much more fun then the teacher picking the word.

Here is the word that choose.

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Term 4 Swimming

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Today I will be telling you about my swimming.

At the start of the week we started swimming  at Canterbury Swim School. Where there for two weeks and on the last week we jump of the diving board.

At the start of it I was with the wrong instructor until they realized they got the role messed up so I moved to sue in the lane pool, We are in the first lane.

We practice arm strokes back strokes and trying to do less strokes and more kicking.

Here is a photo of some swimming we have done.

That is Ellenessa Sophie and Akimano.

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Word of the week

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Today I will be showing you my word of the week. The word of the week is something we do each week we get a new word. We go on a dictionary and find out what it means.
Here is the work I did.

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Maths

Kumusta ka readers,

Today I will be sharing you my math's. We arr learning geometry witch is shapes and learning how they transform and enlarge and shrink. for this math's I had to put patterns in a document. here is the work I did.

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I am a rock song for AZTEC

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Today I will be sharing you about my reading activity. For our reading activity we had to listen to a song, The song we had to listen to was I am a rock. we had to answer questions. here is the work I had to do.

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Math because Math

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Today I will be sharing you my Math's. we are learning about geometry. geometry is shapes.
Here is the work I did.

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Word of the week alienated

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Today I will be sharing my word of the week. The word of the week is something we do each week.
so we can learn new words each week. the word for this week is alienated.
Here is the work I did.

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Hyperbole

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Today I will be sharing my writing. We are learning language features. The language we are learning this time is hyperboles. A hyperbole is something dramatic like 'It's so fluffy I'm going to die!' It is obviously a lie.

Here is some of the work I have done. It is not finished.

Hyperbole: The baby bear claws were as small as an ant, The mountain was a step super water slide. 

I raced to meet my friends. I was so excited that I might explode. 

My friend Eddie said I might launch into space. Im was so excited.

I'm hungry I might wat a hole horse 

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Weekly word

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Today I will be sharing my word of the week. The word of the week is something we do every week we get a new word. The word we got today is validated.  We are learning to learn new words and use them in sentences and to identify our emotions. Here is the work I did.

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My math

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Today I will be sharing my math to you. Each week we get different math to do, this math is not hard but its not easy. We are learning to notice maths. We are learning to find the area of any shape. This is practice.

Here is the math I did.

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Maths

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Today I will be posting my math, the math that I will be showing you is called math observation.

We look at a photo and write stuff down about it here is the math that I did

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Word of the week

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Today I will be posting my word of the week the word of the week is something we do each week.
We get a word and research about it on a dictionary if you want to use this dictionary here is the  The link anyway here is my word of the week I did

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Onomatopoeia writting

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Today I will be sharing my onomatopoeia

What is an  Onomatopoeia, an onomatopoeia is the sound of thing in a scenting like the bomb went boom.

Here is my writing I did

I  hear: shouting from the crowd/ cheering whooooooo hooooo

I hear: people puffing hh hhh hhh hhh

I hear: clap at the start of the race. BANGGGG

I hear: commentator. 

I hear: clapping. Clap noise

I hear: a bell for bell lap.

I hear: Footsteps on the track 

I hear the wind.

I Hear the clap for the race to start

The commentators voice was rumbling and echoing above me

The wind was rushing past my face, ‘Whssss’.

There was a loud thump thump on the track

My competition is breathing heavily  Hhh Hhh Hhh.

I'm running around the track with my feat thumping thump thump on the ground and heavy breathing Hhh Hhh Hhh Hhh  

Math

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Today I will be  sharing with you my math

We get math like this every week

WORD OF THE WEEK ;)

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Today I will be sharing my word of the week with you.

The word of the week is something we do each week, We get a word and  research about it

Here is the work I did. ;)

Maths

Hello welcome to my blog here is the math I did on Monday. We are learning to know the measurement of area and perimeter. We had to fill out a slide with Area and Perimeter.

Here is the work I did on Monday.





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WOW (word of the week)

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Today I am posting my word of the week.

We get a new word and find out what it means and post it on our blog.

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Word of the week :)

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Today I will be sharing my word of the week, the word of the week is something we do every week.
We get a new word and find out what it means and post it on our blog.

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Maths

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Today I will share with you some math I did.

We are learning to notice numbers and learn how to do a stem leaf graph and make mathematical statements about it.

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Catchy Writing

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This term we are working on a strong narrative. It has to be believable and descriptive and Constantine.  

Yesterday, we were learning to show not tell. we looked for all our week action word we changed them into strong action word using thesaurus. Here is the link to Thesaurus  

This is how we did it:  Al gave Miss D coffee

This is the sentience we changed: Al kindly rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino. 

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Word of the week :)

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Today I will be posting the word of the week.

The word of the week is something my class does every week.

Here is the word of the week I did.

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What multiplication can you see v2

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Today I will share with you my math for today.

its called what multiplication can you see.

We are learning to write down what we notice and turn it into a mathematical statement.
Here is my work I did for math.

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Word of the week

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Today I will post my word of the week, if you dont know what the word of the week is its something me and my class do. Every week.

Here is my word of the week.

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Making a Strong Narrative

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Today we will be showing you what we have been doing in Term 2 writing. This term we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable, descriptive and consistent. We can describe the setting and characters. 

Today we did Sick Sentences. We changed boring sentences into strong descriptive sentences  into strong descriptive sentences. 

Here is one of my boring sentences 

Anna touched the mirror 

Here is the changed sentence. 

Anna sat down and Anna touched the mirror. The class shook With her Tips of her fingers

We also wrote a story here is the photo we used.

Here is my favorite paragraph that I wrote: When she placed her hand on the mirror she got pulled in by a ugler version of her. The uglier version of her swapped  places with Anna and put a blanket over her face. When her mom came up and gave the ugly thing a hug when she did that the beast bit her head off. The beast went down stairs still with the blanket on and ripped her dads head off and killed her brother and sister as well. The beast went back to the attic and told the girl you family is dead I killed them all.

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Maths

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 Welcome to my blog today I am showing you some math I did where learning to notice numbers I made a graph of read pink and half red and half pink.

 

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My story

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I will be telling you a story I wrote about a massive flood.

We are learning to write a strong narrative to do that we need to make it believable and descriptive . We started by looking at a photo.

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Sean was a really short boy, he had no hair at all and he was bald.

He was always happy like all the time when his parents died he was so happy at there funeral. He did not cry, not even one bit he was laughing the whole time.

In Sean's spare time he watches videos on how to survive.  He was really smart in all subjects.

20 years later there was a warning about a flood going to happen so Sean was prepared. He was in his room until he ran outside to see a massive tank being put on top of him, not an army tank, a fish tank it was huge. Sean was a Hydrologist. So he knew the water pressure and just everything about water. He called his friend William James who was the smartest man alive William James picked up the phone and said “oh my god what is happening” I said “honestly im in a fishbowl And I'm a hydrologist so hopefully I know what's going to happen with the water and you're the smartest man alive so what are we gonna do”.

James William came over before the flood and opened the door to the fish bowl and said “let’s build a robot megalodon and robot killer blue whale”.

“Thats a great idea Sean said but where we going to get the stuff to build it” 

15 hours later they built the megalodon. A killer whale attacked the meg but the meg just ate it in one bite. And 15 more hard working hours. Finally the blue killer whale was built. It was huge like we built it too big but it will protect us. 

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Weekly word

Magic Maths Pattern

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Yesterday, Our class did some math's patterns. We started looking at some blue dots. We talked about them and looked for patterns. The patterns got bigger and bigger. The biggest one looked like a box that could open because there was a hinge. We wrote down what we noticed on a google drawing.

If you want to make a copy you can get the link HERE The challenge was answering the questions.
this is what I did:

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Reading

KIA ORA readers, today I am posting a post card for my reading task.
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Reading

Hello readers today I am posting my reading task please leave feedback on how I can make it better. Bye :)

Weekly word

hello reader's today I will be posting the word of the week.

the word of the week is (Compassionate).

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Reading

Writing

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today I have made a poem 




                                                                   My Scooter 

               This is my scooter.

Its gold and  fast. 

This is my scooter.

Its fun to ride with its black grips.

This is my scooter. I enjoy riding it and trying new tricks at the skate park.

Maths v2

writing

Maths

reading

writting

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Today I will be fixing the sick sentence above here is my sentence. 

The dogs munched on the biscuits. All of a sudden they started to grow at a phenomenal speed.

They are now GIGINATIC. They require a massive amount of kia to munch on.

Maths

                                              MATHS

           If there was 4 children they would each get 47

                                      1                            2                              3                            4

                      47 Easter eggs       47 Easter eggs        47 Easter eggs       47 Easter eggs 

                                                                47+47+47+47=188 

                                                 So 188 divided by 4 children =47 

                                                               Or 47 x 4 = 188 

  

           If they all got 1 each then there is 188 children 

                                                             188 divided by 188 = 1 

Reading

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Today I am going to be talking about the story called Who froze Farrell Flint? by Johanna Knox

In the year 2117 there is a famous research center on mars where they work with martian bacteria.
Minnie sharp is a kid detective for the red planet police who has to work out who froze Farrell flint and why.
Minnie sharp talks to all the scientist one by one to work who froze Farrell Flint 

After she talked to all the scientist she was able to identify who froze Farrell Flint and solved the case of who froze Farrell flint 
My favorite  part of the story was when Mirhia who was one of the scientists got BUSTED for freezing Farrell Flint