Hello, welcome to my blog today,
I will be telling you a story I wrote about a massive flood.
We are learning to write a strong narrative to do that we need to make it believable and descriptive . We started by looking at a photo.
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Sean was a really short boy, he had no hair at all and he was bald.
He was always happy like all the time when his parents died he was so happy at there funeral. He did not cry, not even one bit he was laughing the whole time.
In Sean's spare time he watches videos on how to survive. He was really smart in all subjects.
20 years later there was a warning about a flood going to happen so Sean was prepared. He was in his room until he ran outside to see a massive tank being put on top of him, not an army tank, a fish tank it was huge. Sean was a Hydrologist. So he knew the water pressure and just everything about water. He called his friend William James who was the smartest man alive William James picked up the phone and said “oh my god what is happening” I said “honestly im in a fishbowl And I'm a hydrologist so hopefully I know what's going to happen with the water and you're the smartest man alive so what are we gonna do”.
James William came over before the flood and opened the door to the fish bowl and said “let’s build a robot megalodon and robot killer blue whale”.
“Thats a great idea Sean said but where we going to get the stuff to build it”
15 hours later they built the megalodon. A killer whale attacked the meg but the meg just ate it in one bite. And 15 more hard working hours. Finally the blue killer whale was built. It was huge like we built it too big but it will protect us.
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