I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I nearly cried watching this short film Connor. There was so much action and suspense in it. I thought neither character would survive. How can you translate all of that intensity and suspense into your writing using language. Watch the video tomorrow for more ways to develop your writing.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
I nearly cried watching this short film Connor. There was so much action and suspense in it. I thought neither character would survive. How can you translate all of that intensity and suspense into your writing using language. Watch the video tomorrow for more ways to develop your writing.
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