This term we are working on a strong narrative. It has to be believable and descriptive and Constantine.
Yesterday, we were learning to show not tell. we looked for all our week action word we changed them into strong action word using thesaurus. Here is the link to Thesaurus
This is how we did it: Al gave Miss D coffee
This is the sentience we changed: Al kindly rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino.
Thank you for reading my blog hope you liked it and learnt something about strong action words.
Kia ora Connor Khiel here,
ReplyDeleteI really like you put the picture of the cappuccino because it looks well with your sentence. I really liked the way you put "lernt something new about action words" at the end because they might of not know what a strong action word and weak action words are. Maybe next time you could put the examples on the top of the picture.
Thank you for your time and please comment on my blog and bye.
From you friend: Khiel