Today I will be sharing my onomatopoeia
What is an Onomatopoeia, an onomatopoeia is the sound of thing in a scenting like the bomb went boom.
Here is my writing I did
I hear: shouting from the crowd/ cheering whooooooo hooooo
I hear: people puffing hh hhh hhh hhh
I hear: clap at the start of the race. BANGGGG
I hear: commentator.
I hear: clapping. Clap noise
I hear: a bell for bell lap.
I hear: Footsteps on the track
I hear the wind.
I Hear the clap for the race to start
The commentators voice was rumbling and echoing above me
The wind was rushing past my face, ‘Whssss’.
There was a loud thump thump on the track
My competition is breathing heavily Hhh Hhh Hhh.
I'm running around the track with my feat thumping thump thump on the ground and heavy breathing Hhh Hhh Hhh Hhh
Thank you for explaining what this word meant Connor.I am struggling to say it let alone understand what the word means.I have never heard of it before.
ReplyDeleteJust remember to use punctuation when writing a sentence.It will make your sentence look neater and easier to read.