I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow you are getting a lot of work done today! Just a couple to think about ...We can usually see a noun. So brave would be a very good adjective. Most of your adjectives are great...I think if I was a soldier I would be scared, and many were very young :( I'm not sure if you may have meant hostile (unfriendly) instead of hostel (a place to stay)? Great work today! :)
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Wow you are getting a lot of work done today! Just a couple to think about ...We can usually see a noun. So brave would be a very good adjective. Most of your adjectives are great...I think if I was a soldier I would be scared, and many were very young :( I'm not sure if you may have meant hostile (unfriendly) instead of hostel (a place to stay)? Great work today! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to seeing your diamante poem! How is that going?
Hello Connor.I can't wait to see what the final poem is going to look like.I am looking forward to reading it.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.