Hello, welcome to my blog today. I am going to be telling you a story.
There was a girl who ran into the woods and found a run down shack.
When she entered the shack she found a pig sty with pigs.
She went to pat the pig but it bit her on the arm. She squealed ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
She leaped back away from the shack and went into the bushes and slept there for the whole day.
Finally she wakes up. and goes back to the shack and forgetting that the pig bit her
And opened the door. It was not pigs, it was a Pegasus. So she went away from the shack and closed the door then opened it again and there were a lot of cats and kittens.
She thought it was a dream but it was a magical shack or she had powers but she didn't
Or did she have powers to make anything appear right in front of her. She thought about her brother being behind the door then she opened the door and it was her brother.
Her brother was scared and said you have been gone for the last 48 hours.
Yep she said and I have powers I think.
Well magically make me go BACK HOME!!! He said.
They stood in front of the shack door and she thought about home.
She opened the shack door to see her bedroom and they walked into her bedroom and they were back at home. THE END
I love your story Connor. You have used your imagination really well.
ReplyDeleteI see that you are remembering your capital letters. :)
I think your story would be even better if you added speech marks when the characters are talking. eg. She squealed,"ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!". I'm not sure if I have the right number of h's!
Well done. I look forward to more of your blogs.