Thursday, 16 April 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Connor,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your narrative with us!
When did you write this? Why are you writing this?
Next step: Remember to start your post with a greeting and then tell everyone what you are doing and why you are posting. Tell us a bit about your story too, like when you wrote and what gave you the inspiration for the characters.
Well done for including dialogue and a variety of punctuation!
Miss D
Very imaginative story Connor.
ReplyDeleteI saw your story plan in another post and hoped you would write the story that went with it. Great detail in the setting, it gives us an understanding of 'where' and 'who' your are writing about.
Remember to use capitals for peoples names, something to look out for as you re-read your stories.
One year later I can see Billy has now learnt how to fly, can he do any other magic?
Keep up with the blogging so we can see what you have been doing