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Monday, 11 May 2020

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hello everyone and welcome to my blog. Today I am writing a story about magic biscuits






There was a knock at the door Brian opend the door to find nobody there apart from a large package.
He opend the package and the box said dog biscuits only for dogs.He did not remember ordering it
so he gave them to hes dog's, Clifford and Jeremiah. Clifford loved the biscuits but Jeremiah did not like them.
 Clifford and Jeremiah started to grow and grow, 3 feet then 4 feet then 5 feet, Brian was petrified he ran in side to get some water when he came back out side Clifford and Jeremiah where all ready 8 feet tall and growing by the second Brian gave them some water to drink  but it took them ages to reach the 
water they where all ready 10 feet tall. After drinking the water they stooped growing. 
Brian looked at his two dogs that where now 10 feet tall and thought to himself they are going to make great guard dogs but they need training because they never scared or did anything to scare anyone he also thought to himself he is going to need a bigger pooper scooper.
Brian new there was no way to make them small again so started his guard dog training with them and orded  a bulldozer to deal with there poop 




1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Connor,
    What a cool (tall) story. Imagine how much you would have to feed dogs this size! I'm so pleased they stopped growing when they had a drink.
    For your helpful things...knew/new. Brian 'knew' means he knows it. Where 'new' means not old.
    The funniest bit was when he ordered a bulldozer...now where did he put the poop?... any ideas?
    Well done!

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