I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Talofa Connor, you keep powering through the work...well done.I can see how you are picking up different emotions throughout the story. I'm going to suggest a helpful 'bit' ...new and knew. Knew is past tense of know so that would be the one you would use in your sentence...'Because she knew where the plant was and knew where to go" Good work :)
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Talofa Connor, you keep powering through the work...well done.I can see how you are picking up different emotions throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to suggest a helpful 'bit' ...new and knew. Knew is past tense of know so that would be the one you would use in your sentence...'Because she knew where the plant was and knew where to go"
Good work :)